Tuesday, May 1, 2007

Chapter 19
Preparing Proposals
Erin Kane and Matthew Smith


Preparing and organizing proposals differ in important ways from preparing and organizing reports. Reports are about information the writer already knows and things that have already happened; they present an answer. Proposals are things that the writer wants to happen and offer ways to do those things; they suggest approaches to discover an answer.

Information that is expected in a proposal:

Situation: Provide a definition of the problem or opportunity, including information that situates it in the organization.

Plan: Presents a plan for resolving the problem or addressing the opportunity.

Benefits: Explain the benefits that will result from adopting the plan.

Approach: Outline methods for implementing the plan, include management plans, schedule, and costs.

Evaluation: Identify an evaluation strategy for determining whether the proposed plan works.

Qualifications: Establish your qualifications for submitting the proposal and implementing the plan.


Using Persuasion in Proposals
To write effective proposals, you need to understand persuasive techniques. Essentially you are establishing agreement about the situation, proposing a plan to address them, and identifying benefits that will accrue if your plan is adopted. The process of preparing a proposal is like a debate, with you imagining, anticipating, and responding to potential arguments that the reader may raise. Persuasion doesn’t mean manipulation. It is applying credible, logical arguments to convince readers that the writers view is appropriate. If people are presented positive attitudes towards the subject they are more likely to accept the proposal.


Preparing proposals
Some of the main reasons proposals are rejected are:
-Lack of new or original ideas
-Diffuse, superficial, or unfocused research plan
-Lack of knowledge of published relevant work
-Lack of experience in the essential methodology
-Uncertainty concerning the future direction
-Questionable reasoning in the experimental approach
-Absence of an acceptable scientific rationale
-Unrealistically large amount of work
-Insufficient experimental detail
-Uncritical approach

Referring to these reasons and making sure none apply to your proposals may increase the chances that your document will be approved.

Preparing a proposal is easier if you are familiar with the preparation process. Like any writing task, preparing a proposal involves managing, planning, drafting, evaluating, and revising.

Planning:
Preparing proposals with go more smoothly if you plan the project. The following should help:

-Be aware of deadlines. If possible, submit proposal early

-Establish an achievable schedule for completing the proposal

-Know the review and evaluation procedure that will be used to assess the document

-Analyze the background knowledge and experience of the intended readers/decision makers.

Drafting:

-Establish a clear link between the problem or opportunity you have identified and substantiated and the plan that you are proposing to solve.

-Provide information about implementation of your plan: Who? When? How? Where? How much?

-Anticipate and address potential objections

-support your generalizations with specific details and examples. Cite your sources. Use visuals and tables to support or make points when possible.

-Use a you-attitude when possible and appropriate

Evaluating:
Once the draft is done, you need to evaluate it, trying to view it the same way as the intended audience.

-Determine if the draft meets of exceeds the criteria for evaluation

-Examine the accuracy of technical content.

-Study the feasibility of the plan
Review acceptability of cost.

-Solicit reviews of the draft from colleagues

Revising:
Your own careful evaluation of the draft as well as feedback from other reviewers will give you ideas for revising the proposal. Check the following:

-Add, modify, or delete information to meet proposal criteria

-Make sure that the argument is coherent

-Is the proposal visually appealing and consistent?

14 comments:

Katie Drietz said...

This chapter was about preparing proposals. I think that it is very important to know how to prepare proposals especially when dealing with technical communications. You have to be aware of your audience and whether or not your proposal will be benificail to them, whether it will catch their attention and whether or not it will keep their attention. All these things can be accomplised by pointers that were summarized from the Burnett cahpter. One of the many points that were made was to always go back and revise and make sure that everything runs together smoothly. Also, making sure that your information is valid and makes sense. I think that they did a very good job going through the chapter and making it easy to understand.

dwinkels said...

Kane and Smith's blog response on chapter 19 informs the reader how to accurately prepare a proposal. I have some experience with preparing proposals at my work. We prepare proposals or estimates to customers for work to be performed. Unlike what Burnett recommends, we usually do not try to persuade the reader, or customer in this case. It is important however to list all work to be done in full detail. Correctness is paramount. It is better to have a complex proposal than a short one that is open for interpretation.

Andrew Nelson said...

This chapter contains a lot of information that will be very helpful for anyone that wishes to create a proposal. I find it slightly funny that this chapter was completed after the wind farm proposal was finished. Nonetheless, the wind farm proposal still followed these guidelines and turned out incredible. The part of the chapter that I found most useful was the part about how to give your proposal a better chance of being accepted.

Eric Kithinji said...

I really enjoyed this chapter and I think it presents good points about preparing proposals. I wish I would have taken this class earlier because throughout my program curriculum, we have had to work on projects almost every semester. The way this works out is by writing a project proposal to the professor first. The professor goes through the project proposal and either approves or rejects it. I have had my proposals rejected and that was because it was not properly prepared. This means I did not follow the guidelines discussed in this chapter. Having taken this course and having worked on the wind farm proposal, I feel more confident and I know this is going to help me a lot in the future. Kane and Smith did a very good job with the summary.

Alex Peters said...

proposals are something i am now familiar with after taking this class. since we did the wind power proposal to the city of mankato i am no aware of all the work that need to go into making a proposal. we were divided up into teams to find information on different subjects. i cant imagine how much work it would be if you had to do a proposalall by yourself that had the complexity of the one we did.

Sachin said...

Kane and Smith blog is about preparing proposals. They have blogged the things needed or things to be considered. It’s about defining a problem, making plan to solve the problem, using outlining method, and establishing the qualifications before submitting a proposal. Use of persuasion in a proposal is a must. At last, a proposal should be added, modified, or deleted to meet the proposal criteria.

detize and shresth said...

This chapter about proposal is interesting to learn how to make proposals. When we were doing the wind farm proposal, we don't know how to do.Now, this chapter gave more idea to make good proposal.In the proposal we should have all the information which it should have.Also we should know the proposal is benefit for audience or not and think how to make it more profitable.

Lindsay said...

We all worked together in class to put together our proposal on wind energy for Mankato. I have never been a part of a proposal before and found the process very interesting. I never realized how much time and effort had to be put into it. There is a lot of research that has to be done in order to have enough information to put on a proposal.

dustin.heidinger said...

This is a chapter that is one of the bullet points of our semester. After working on a proposal for the bulk of the semester its kind of ironic that this one comes up right after we presented our project to the city.

Nick Krekelberg said...

This article should have been ready to read and posted before we did our proposal project. This chapter explains what a proposal should include. Before we did our wind farm proposal, we should have read this. This is going to help me when I go in to my job and I have to do a proposal for a project and how we should accomplish it. I think that this was a very well written and put together blog. This was easy to read and very easy to understand. I really liked this blog because of the user-friendly face it had.

stingd said...

this chapter covers alot of useful techniques to preparing proposals. when you are preparing a proposal, you always need to make sure your information is good and makes sense. when you really wnat the the proposal to sink in to your audience, you need to repeat some of your main topics over in order to get it on to your audiences mind. this chapter was very well summarized by kane and smith!

shrestha nisha said...

The Burnett chapter 19, preparing proposals is one of the important chapter in technical communication. It is important that a good proposal should always keep the audience in mind, if the proposal can persuade the audience or not, if it is beneficial for the audience or not. I think the summary is really knowledgeable for preparing effective proposal. A good example of making a proposal was of course our wind farm proposal, where we did a lot of research to get adequate information.

Chris Arce said...

Great chapter. Kane and Smith do a nice job of summarizing the information. I do believe however, this chapter should have been mandatory reading for everyone prior to the launching of the wind farm project. A well written proposal will sell itself, there is no persuasion needed. It also usually involves money. Since we were not making a proposal in response to a solicitation for a bid, we were only making an appeal to the city. There fore our document needed to have a persuasive argument.

Bradley said...

This group did a very good job of organizing their information and it makes it very easy to read and find information that you maybe looking for. One thing that I would sigest would be to add bold words and underlines to help break up the information a little more. Creating proposals is an every day occurrence for me, I put together about 2-5 proposals each day for customers of ours. The proposals need to be detailed enough to where your audience, in my case a prospective customer, understands what work will be done and why you are building the job the way you intend.